You said, “Love is patient and love is kind,”
as though it were indisputable fact,
to be accepted and not debated;
magnificent knowledge to be enshrined,
another cell in your database mind.
You write love in edicts, stamped and signed;
barren words, well-meaning but cracked,
your sentences carefully confined,
never any feelings to retract,
your sentiments kindly translated.
You tell me how the dusk was created,
how the congealing sunset was designed,
but the night droops over unabated;
idle planets refuse to be aligned
and the stars will not be neatly stacked.
You long for logic in the abstract,
for consistency, for the exact;
so let our love be annotated,
let feelings be evaluated–
but please, dear, leave the sky undefined.
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Otherwise, this is pretty good.
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Yeah, there's really no hope for this poem.
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"but please, dear, leave the sky undefined." - great finisher!
Great work as always, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Indeed, the rhyming is just stupid. If you can't actually tell it rhymes there's really no point putting all that effort into making it rhyme. But that's what I get for entering a wacky contest.
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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.
Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.
*May just be a very sneaky way to make you look at my page. But probably not.
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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.
Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.
*May just be a very sneaky way to make you look at my page. But probably not.
I might do that, actually, some of the thoughts in this I quite liked. Thanks!
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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.
Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.
*May just be a very sneaky way to make you look at my page. But probably not.
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