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Enter a house of veiled sins
Sadistic whispers, mocking grins
Tiptoe across the mottled stone
Climb the stair with a murdered groan
Enter a room with mirrors shattered
Walls stained, curtains tattered
Rest on a chair with a muffled sigh
Wait for the remnant of evil gone by

He enters, head-bowed, as if deep in prayer
His skin dark and numb, his clothes threadbare
He turns to the fireplace, puts logs in the ashes
And exposes his back, a cloak of foul gashes
She joins him, her young eyes stagnant and grey
In her single scarred hand she carries a tray
Her flimsy body shredded and raw
Together, they fade as they reach the door
Then, from the window, comes a mournful hum
And from their rotting, creaking slum
A hundred tortured souls emerge
They come in a wailing, heaving surge
Each industrious body broken, bruised
Ghosts used to being used

Throw closed those fettered curtains tattered
Run from the room with mirrors shattered
Rush down the stair with a murdered groan
Clatter across the mottled stone
Leave this house of uncovered sins
Claw at the memories of ragged skins
Run from this place of dead segregation
Run from the evil of the Plantation
©2007-2009 *chugglepuff
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Author's Comments

For a contest (I came 3rd :)), inspired by the above image [link]
:iconbeccacox: beccacox kindly allowed me to use her image, her work is well worth looking at!

I don't normally write ghost stories or anything similar, but there's a first time for everything.

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:iconspirogs:
woah... this is good =D
I like it

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:iconchugglepuff:
Thank you!

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:iconspirogs:
yer welcome =D

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Practice makes improvement!
Perfection is UNACHIEVEABLE!!

I am a Rookie trainer at ~Kanto-Dex
GO :pokeball: GO!!
:iconsedahliah:
Very well done. This will serve as inspiration, I will work with more focus and determination than ever. :work:

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:iconchugglepuff:
Thank you! Looking forward to the fruits of your labour!

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:icononewithdarkness:
very detialed, and near Epic in its execution. i love the subtle imagery that blends into an oddly appreciated tapestry, of loose floor boards, and eyes peering through old facades.

well done, reminds me how long its been since i've wrriten a poem, let alone squeeze out something of quality, i'm keeping an eye on you.

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:iconchugglepuff:
Thank you so much for the comment, fav and watch!

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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.

Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.

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:icononewithdarkness:
your most welcome!

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put the government back in the people's hands! [link]
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
:icondragonfriend9:
That was difficult to read ^^; (I mean because I'm Danish)
But for what I understood, it sound good, very well wrote ;)

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