Lettersh shlurring down the page
Jumumbling before my clumsy eyes
Shpawn like twirling bacteria
Emotions boiling, overflowing, boiling, overflowing
Frothy and uncontrolled, they flood pararagraphsh
Fervent ink singes a paper in the hole
All shense losht in drunken dribblings
Collapshing under the weight of thoughts unguided
I shlip towards unconsciousne-
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Author's Comments A bit of an experiment, I quite like it. A change from my usual style.For a contest where I had to write 50 words on the prompt "pissed prose" or "berol burns, biro smudges". I did not place  Anyone with much experience on how you talk when you're drunk, I'd be happy to hear your advice on making it more authentic. (Not so much on the word use, I'm aware you probably wouldn't use a fair few of those words...) Particularly with reference to how much slurring occurs - every 's' or just some of them? |
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It was really good.
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.
Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.
*May just be a very sneaky way to make you look at my page. But probably not.
Au Revoir!
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put the government back in the people's hands! [link]
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
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“Writing is really very easy. Tap a vein and bleed onto the page. Everything else is just technical.” ~derrick jensen
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A stitch in time mucks up the space-time continuum.
Clicking this link will give you superpowers*.
*May just be a very sneaky way to make you look at my page. But probably not.
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“Writing is really very easy. Tap a vein and bleed onto the page. Everything else is just technical.” ~derrick jensen
Of course, it might differ from person to person, but I never noticed myself slurring when drunk. O.o I dunno, I suppose I should ask a friend or something. >.>
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